The Cycle - Comments

Donatello;; (100)

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Beautiful poem, perfect wording, brilliant rythm and your grammar is spot on. I'm very impressed.

January 7th, 2011 at 02:23pm

skyerocket. (100)

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Oh wow this is beautifully written. I like how it's kind of sarcastic, like you can actually hear someone reading it, you know?
Great job Meg, I really like it.

March 4th, 2010 at 04:36am

cold.little.crime (100)

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i love this, it has the whole bitter sarcasm thing going on, but it portrays how uniqueness is false and there isn't such a thing. I just love it. Well done to you ! x

March 1st, 2010 at 07:24pm

Alexander Gaskarth. (100)

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Great poem :D
I love the whole thing ^_____^
xx

March 1st, 2010 at 02:43am