With your big blue eyes - Comments

Nice flow, I love how you worded it and how well it rhymed. I especially love the stanza:
[i]"With your big blue eyes,
And fireflies
Flashing through the scene,
with their tail lights
Not yet a romance, but a crime
With your big blue eyes,
You saved my life"[/i] Totally the best part =)

thanks for the comments.....
this was originally supposed to be a song, but it turned into a poem instead.
lol i'm a little random sometimes.
just to let you know this was about my dog.
He saved me from getting hit by a big rig cause i was on roller blades and walking him. he ended up not stopping, but running. lol wow. what an epic day.
nobody but a squirrel died, so don't be like omg...... :0

This is AMAZING! :D

so awsome !!!! :)