This is excellent. It's really haunting and heart-wrenching as [b] One-Truth [/b] said but it also has a speck of hope and a lot of love for this person in it. The charatcer speaking seems extremely consider for the other person... it's jus t the kind of poem that really makes you think. I love it. :)
Pretty great. I like when poems have ambition and you definately transmitted a haunting and heart-wrenching idea through these words. The selflessness of the character feels really tender. I like it a lot :D
Love you hun:)