I really like this, just one thing that I think you just do but maybe wouldn't work for all of your writing, is the structure of your poems. I think it would have made more of an impact if you'd sort of formed it differently. Ever read crank? the pems in it are so captivating, and the way they're shaped kind of make it that much cooler. still, loved it :)
March 19th, 2010 at 10:02pm
