Please Don't Go... - Comments

I mean WOW, You are a really talented individual. The tone of the poem made cry a little on this inside because I can relate to this. How you want someone not to leave but Alas! You have to let them go. The part "My tears fall on my words" it was so symbolic. Great Job!!

this is such a beautiful poem!!
i loved it,i could almost relate to it :)

This poem really speaks.. Really //relates// to me.

this is really good it reminds me of a bunch of friends who left T_T

This is very amazing! I love how it flows so well together. <3

:'''/ you should post your songs, which are amazing too . liddo shakenn

I don't care about mistakes. It's what you meant that matters. This is such an amazing poem.
It's so meaningfull. : ) Thanks for writing it!!!

I love the poem generally, its a nice idea and it flows well, however at this part
"I've known you forever and I've loved you 'till.
You've been the best friend I've always needed.
I have your trust, I have your love, but what I need the most I won't have for long."
The flow kind of breaks and you have to regain it at some point.

And to be picky, you have father down in the fifth line; you mean further?
The poem was beautiful though. :)