The Guilty Nightmare - Comments

Lol Ty :)

re-reading your poetry, its pretty amazing (: i hope you keep writing you are very talented

This is cool. :) I liked how you made it turn into a dream at the end. Very well written. It was a little forced at some parts but it was good. :)

lol thanks, I'm new at this. it means alot to me that you liked it :)

i forgot to say nice job (: haha

i love the ending! very clever words, i think maybe you shud try a different rhyming format though, it seems like you forced alot of it. but i really like the story line and how you sticked with it! i like when you said "you pray "father i have sinned" "