The Guilty Nightmare - Comments

  • TEZ.

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    Lol Ty :)
    April 18th, 2015 at 03:53pm
  • sweet.angel

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    re-reading your poetry, its pretty amazing (: i hope you keep writing you are very talented
    April 18th, 2015 at 05:17am
  • Lovely Luna Lovegood

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    This is cool. :) I liked how you made it turn into a dream at the end. Very well written. It was a little forced at some parts but it was good. :)
    April 22nd, 2010 at 07:41pm
  • TEZ.

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    lol thanks, I'm new at this. it means alot to me that you liked it :)
    March 24th, 2010 at 04:04pm
  • FrozenFire

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    i forgot to say nice job (: haha
    March 24th, 2010 at 06:01am
  • FrozenFire

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    i love the ending! very clever words, i think maybe you shud try a different rhyming format though, it seems like you forced alot of it. but i really like the story line and how you sticked with it! i like when you said "you pray "father i have sinned" "
    March 24th, 2010 at 06:00am