Outside the Window - Comments

I loved this one. :) Just one problem, its fate, but other than that it's good. :)

lol i did and i liked that one too
oh you're new that's cool that you wrote something already when i see people that have been on here for months and haven't wrote anything lol but then again some people just dont have time
ot they're just lazy :-p

Thanks : ) I'm new on here so getting a hang of things. you should check out my other one called The Guilty Nightmare

great poem i like it
=)