Judging for a contest-
At first, I was struck by your careful choice of words. Everything flows together nicely and you tell a very powerful story. There is such amazing imagery created in this poem, and as I read it, our found myself imagining the scenes you described. Very mysterious and a bit of a head trip - love it! Exceptional work. :)
At first, I was struck by your careful choice of words. Everything flows together nicely and you tell a very powerful story. There is such amazing imagery created in this poem, and as I read it, our found myself imagining the scenes you described. Very mysterious and a bit of a head trip - love it! Exceptional work. :)