Hell level 2... - Comments

This is very deep. I love it. Is this how you feel or do you just have a really good sense of empathy?

oh my damn! fu*n good poem......

Zach.. you have so much talent in you.. and all this sad stuff makes me worried about you. i dont know you very well. i dont know whats goin on in your life. and hey we havent even been friends long. but we are friends. or at least im your friend. If there is anything u EVER need to talk about im here. Cant have my friends all upset. :] you have an amazing talent for writing poetry and being able to let your feelings fly freely in your writing amazes me. I just hope one day you take your talent and become something with it because im sure you can. I know what im saying isnt really much to you. Ive never been the type to share my feelings freely and thats why i feel your so lucky to be able to write your feelings when its hard for me to even find my feelings to write them down o.O.. weird huh?.... The thing u feeling things would be easier if you werent put on this earth. The truth is hun if you werent put here on earth. all of us in the world communicated with you would have NEVER been blessed by your presence x].. just think of that.. remember theres going to be heartache in the world because if there wasnt sadness or crappy things that hurt us .. we wouldnt apreciate the good things in the world x]. hah where the good things in the world come into place.. i have no clue .. im still tryna find my happiness in all the stress in my life right now but im hopeing for a day that there is.

i really like your detailed description, your rhymes are not over done and every thing flows harmoniously.

aww im sorry.. this is really good and really sad. i hope you feel better one day <3