i love it(: my fav part was...
"dreaming of my knight to save me from this
lonesome disaster."
lonesome disaster... hmmm(: i love it! when you say disaster you know it's horrible.. the lonesome part gives it even more effect! this poem touched my heart.
Nice, but a few things. "Just wait two years babygirl." doesn't seem to fit, and "loneliness disaster" doesn't make sense, haha. Perhaps you meant 'lonely disaster'?
"dreaming of my knight to save me from this
lonesome disaster."
lonesome disaster... hmmm(: i love it! when you say disaster you know it's horrible.. the lonesome part gives it even more effect! this poem touched my heart.