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  • florence

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    Wow, I love the sort of old-fashioned feel to this.
    I like how it feels sophisticated but yet still somehow slightly comical because of your word choice.
    I also like how it flows. Not really ryhme-like, but it has a unique feel to it, something just on the tip of your tongue.
    Overall, good job! =]
    April 4th, 2010 at 11:48pm
  • purpleXrain

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    This is beautifully written
    well done
    April 4th, 2010 at 10:12pm
  • rooftopsandbirds

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    Oh my, there isn't a thing about this poem I wouldn't like. So beautiful. And painful.
    April 4th, 2010 at 09:50pm
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