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spencer hastings. (350)

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This is a wonderful poem, and you definitely have talent. I love your style of writing! <3

September 26th, 2010 at 09:23pm

Yeah_Nope (100)

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You are extremely talented. I love how even though this is free verse there's still the slight rhyming element to it.

April 27th, 2010 at 09:48pm

FrozenFire (100)

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the last line is great. i wish people would wake up and just eat. if guys like girl's for their body, they arent 'real' men.they need a slap in the face and realize that food is a gift! and its one of the greatest joys in life =D this is really good, =)

April 20th, 2010 at 04:00am

SweetieYouHadMe (100)

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Yer amazing Kid, keep writiing hun:)

April 6th, 2010 at 03:40am

cutiemulf (100)

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what a sad poem. it's very beautifully written, though :) good job

April 6th, 2010 at 03:35am