The Protector - Comments

Wow, I can sympathize with you. This poem is beautiful and I love the soft rhyme scheme you have going on in it. You have a natural talent for poetry, m'dear. =)

This is great, I don't really know the feeling, if anything this is a massively huge exaggeration of myself. But its so descriptive, I want your talent.
:D Excellent work bi ffle :D

wow. It's like you read my mind. I know how you feel, you have to help others but you can't even help your self. It's like everything you built to protect your self starts to fall away and then people see the real you and the dont like what they see, so you build an even bigger wall to protect your self and now you wont ever let any one in.

thank you for writing this it's beautiful.