"I Can Walk On Water" - Comments

I really love how you have dialogue in your poems. They work really well.

Once again, LOVING IT! wow...just...wow!

Really enjoyed this one dude! Excellent job! I agree [b]V[/b] haha A+.

So I don't know if this is correct but I feel as thought the first line of the stanza is a problem,situation, or obstacle. The second line seems like the typelical negative "I can't" or "I don't know how". Its setting the example of the wrong way to look at things.

The third line seems like and "I can" and it is like looking at the world from a different angle. It's positivity, hope, belief, and optimism.

I think? Haha of it isn't I enjoyed it alot anyway. Bravo!

lol, I was completley confused at first, but then I got it. It's really clever how you have shaped this poem and how its slightly hard to understand it at first, which makes grasping its meaning all the more interesting. I love how you ended with the title.

This is the best poem I've read on here in a long time. Fuckin' A+ dude.

After the second stanza I got the message, and it was a real joy to read. So it's analyzing your current dilemmas, and seeing the positive aspect of it. But I love how you used TERRIBLE scenarios haha, and find a clever twist of optimism at the end.

Love it!

-Mike