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  • Look.Alive.Sunshine

    Look.Alive.Sunshine (100)

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    Simply wonderful.
    December 28th, 2010 at 01:29am
  • emilovestheskyy

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    It's quite nice, but I feel like there could be a lot more done with this. The phrases are lovely, but it seems like they aren't worded right. Great attempt though, you can work it out easily. :)
    April 10th, 2010 at 11:21pm
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