Cloned Memories - Comments

I like how you started it off with that italicized bit and I loved how you described the tear-stains as "vintage." Fantastic use of language.

the feelings that come to be as read this poem are so powerful, i love this poem a lot

This was beautiful.
The imagery you create is stunning and I wish I could write poems as well as you. D:
But yes, I loved this.

that was actually a little upsetting!! i almost cried!!

This was so beautiful and amazing and chilling. One of my all time favorites that I've EVER read, through book or internet. Wow. Just...wow.

Wow, this was amazing.
Your description was amazing.
It was powerful and written so well.

I really loved the phrase "vintage tear-stains." It's something I've never heard before, but I can tell exactly what you meant. The poem does have a certain sense of nostalgia to it, and I really liked it. It was short but sweet. Very beautiful :)

this was beautiful. so moving it brought me to tears. you have a talent

There's totally no tears in my eyes now. At all.

Dude, this was beautiful. I don't really read poems much, but this was just... so amazing. I love especially the sentence "Feeling like a counterfeit, an imposter". I have nothing constructive to say. Only Bravo.

OH WOW!
"Wiping off vintage tear-stains, just to add more" and "Cracked, canyon crevasses in place of internal abyss."

I love this a lot. :)

This is a wonderful poem. I love the quote that you used and how that you actually inserted it in order to expand it on your poem.

It's really sad and nostalgic; the regret is tangible, but I can grasp a bit of hope in there.