You Broke What Remained - Comments

sorry I meant to put sores not sours XD

lol yeah, it was on the spot one and with the slang I speak they rhyme lol. but I have done some others you may like.

I like the feel & idea of the poem, how she is heartbroken
but the lack of rhyming with 'heart' and 'caught' as well as the 'yours' and sours not sounding the same ending threw me off.
yes, heartbreak Is practically impossible to hide... >_<. been there, done that... more than once... not nice memories at all...