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ilovemyemoboys
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I like how you get like the feel of what you mean out of just a few lines xD I think it could be longer but its great :)
April 14th, 2010 at 05:30am
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very short.
i think if you added another stanza, it would be better.
but i like how its really short yet has so much meaning and power behind it!!
one of my favorites ive read tonight!!
keep writing!!
April 14th, 2010 at 04:58am
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