i like this very unique nice job...i hope you post more poems. Great poem.
June 29th, 2011 at 07:03am
This is a beautiful poem altogether.
You're so original with the way it's laid out.
Only thing that i have against is that it should have a more "hook shaped" ending, so that you literally [not really] catch the reader's heart. Good Work m'dear I'm glad you posted on my journal :D
