What's Really Out There - Comments

Love it!

Awesome!

This is very visual and truthful! Great job!

I really like this!
It's got terrific flow to it, and as usual, I love your style of rhyming and the way you phrase things.
Plus, the concept is really neat.
Kinda makes you think about what's outside when you're sitting in your room at night... which is eerie, but it paints a wonderful picture!
Job well done, my dear!

I really like it. It dose make you think, and maybe even a little scared. really good.

i liked the rhyme alot in this =) and the italian slant or whatever you call it, really added to the poem i think.(the fact that you didnt do it on all of your lines too) nice job=) makes you think