How Can I Make This Right - Comments

  • Cascade

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    This has a lot of emotion and people could really relate to it. I know I can. :) I like how you put it all together, choosing these words and making it into a poem. You put a lot of feeling in it, and it's great. :)
    February 6th, 2011 at 06:13pm
  • optik03

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    I do this everyday, beautiful way to put it into words.
    April 28th, 2010 at 09:16pm
  • Dots

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    Wow sister I really love this poem of yours! It just got all of this emotions of yours in it and it works really good altogether:)
    April 17th, 2010 at 04:03pm