How Can I Make This Right - Comments

This has a lot of emotion and people could really relate to it. I know I can. :) I like how you put it all together, choosing these words and making it into a poem. You put a lot of feeling in it, and it's great. :)

I do this everyday, beautiful way to put it into words.

Wow sister I really love this poem of yours! It just got all of this emotions of yours in it and it works really good altogether:)