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Sandii_x3 (100)

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you made a typo..
other than that..
this is just fucking brilliant.
i love it.
<3

September 11th, 2008 at 11:44am
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I think you're getting the hang of abstract noun use, which certainly improves it. A little imagery would bring this to life.

January 14th, 2008 at 03:19am

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