A little amaturish. No offense. And the last two stanza's are the exact words from a song.
You dont know me, and I dont know you. But if you happen to listen to music when writing poems, you really shouldnt. Let the poems come from your heart and not your mind. The best poems in life are the raw, heartfelt words from your heart.
Keep writing and you may get something really good here. :]
You dont know me, and I dont know you. But if you happen to listen to music when writing poems, you really shouldnt. Let the poems come from your heart and not your mind. The best poems in life are the raw, heartfelt words from your heart.
Keep writing and you may get something really good here. :]