I'm Dreaming - Comments

Toxic Love (100)

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Hey B. Yep, that decribes her feelings almost perfect...in a little bit nicer words that is. haha :) It was realy sweet of you to write her a poem like that! Love you babe!

April 22nd, 2010 at 09:16pm

just hollow birds (100)

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Really sweet =) I love it <3
I think the second line is supposed to be 'field full of flowers'..?? Doesn't seem to make much sense without the 's' on the end of 'flower' =)
Great job though.

April 20th, 2010 at 10:42am

Love Me. (100)

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wow i'm commenting on my own poem lol well this isnt about me its about my really good friend well one of them and well she went through a lot with this guy and i promised her i would write her a poem and here it is !!!!!!! please super please comment and tell me wht you think about thanks alot for reading it =))

April 19th, 2010 at 08:58pm