I'm Dreaming - Comments

Hey B. Yep, that decribes her feelings almost perfect...in a little bit nicer words that is. haha :) It was realy sweet of you to write her a poem like that! Love you babe!

Really sweet =) I love it <3
I think the second line is supposed to be 'field full of flowers'..?? Doesn't seem to make much sense without the 's' on the end of 'flower' =)
Great job though.

wow i'm commenting on my own poem lol well this isnt about me its about my really good friend well one of them and well she went through a lot with this guy and i promised her i would write her a poem and here it is !!!!!!! please super please comment and tell me wht you think about thanks alot for reading it =))