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  • Phantom.Katt

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    aww its amazing. i lovez it.
    July 19th, 2010 at 08:08am
  • iluvzya6558

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    Just that some of the things are kind of choppy. It goes from like "the rain stopped falling" to "the brown eyed girl keeps dancing in my reflection" and then i got confused. so, it's really good though. (: And your welcome! :D
    April 29th, 2010 at 10:30pm
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    Mmm that really makes you think. Nice. (: Only thing I would change is maybe finding away for everything to flow better. But the content is great. Keep writing :D
    April 26th, 2010 at 03:08am
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