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LiSwtSLaS
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a couple sentences don't seem to be worded right (then why through darkness do you grope) I think to fit the verse correctly it should be tweaked ever so slightly. Otherwise, high quality stuff.
April 20th, 2008 at 02:46am
warning-nimrod!
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i like the rhythm/meter in it, it sounds cool.
plus i liked the whole thing anyway. ^_^
December 28th, 2007 at 09:01am
Sailor Meranda
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Still loving it. Took a second for me too get into it, but once I did I loved it.
December 11th, 2007 at 04:28am
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