The Darkness - Comments

I like how you put darkness in a good light as well as bad, its a really good spin on it. Write on.

Yes, that line about the darkness saving you, it is so true... It can feel easier to live in the darkness, and I suppose once you've been there, there is always a temptation to return... you have to have a root, something to hold onto, I think...

it first it feels like it saves, the darkness giving a momentary escape from the pain.
but leaves you even more hurting, and you realize it was just bait in a game.

"the darkness can save yet it can hurt so much more."
i totally know how that is <3
darkness is a tricky thing...
it tends to paint you a picture of a solution to what you want... then shatter it to pieces onc you take it and leave you broken....

this is amazingly powerful, incredible katie!
x

i like this <3 it's really good :D