Giving In (Inspired by Crank by Ellen Hopkins) - Comments

So good!! :) I read Impulse by Her she is a really good writer and so are you :)

I read that and glass and thought that it was almost exactly the same as someones life on crack. Didn't expect that.
But good poem, I noticed that there is one part that rhymes and it kinds through it off, but other than that, It's pretty good.