How to Tell a Hideaway That Freedom is Better than Safety - Comments

Cold Wind (150)

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I really like it...it rhymed without being stupid...

January 14th, 2008 at 09:48pm

Julie Black (650)

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Another great poem by one of my favorites xD
I love the message it sends to me: I see a being, shut off, closed, and one who tries to set them free. The narrator.
Amazing work once again. Simple and elegant.

January 13th, 2008 at 08:32pm

almeye11 (100)

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love it! i agree with everyone else, great title!

January 6th, 2008 at 07:59am

The One Who's Asleep (100)

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oh wow, that was great. i like how short it is. The title goes great too.

December 22nd, 2007 at 01:55am

xmr. blackbirdx (100)

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so thats why i thought i recognized it. =D
i really like this one. it flows prittily. >w<
and its beautiful overall. lovely. <3

December 21st, 2007 at 08:49am

Leonore Paisley (200)

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I love this.

It has a very nice flow. :mrgreen:

December 17th, 2007 at 12:53pm