How to Tell a Hideaway That Freedom is Better than Safety - Comments

I really like it...it rhymed without being stupid...

Another great poem by one of my favorites xD
I love the message it sends to me: I see a being, shut off, closed, and one who tries to set them free. The narrator.
Amazing work once again. Simple and elegant.

love it! i agree with everyone else, great title!

oh wow, that was great. i like how short it is. The title goes great too.

so thats why i thought i recognized it. =D
i really like this one. it flows prittily. >w<
and its beautiful overall. lovely. <3

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I love this.

It has a very nice flow. :mrgreen: