Life goes on - Comments

so beauitfully put... short rhymes that are, like the others said as well, full of power and tell a story. the imagery is easily described and the tone of the poem just fits to it. a masterpiece x]

I loved this poem a lot. It captured such a true meaning and it had depth. I loved how you used the beauty of rhyming. I think that you did in such a way that was really awesome and well thought out. I thought that it was so real and raw and just packed with power. A poem needs to be powerful and that's what it was. I thought you wrote so well. It was impeccable!

The last four lines are my favorite, because it's true.
this is really good, I like it so much. :)

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O this is well good i love the picture it creates really deep. !!!! xD

O.O Wow... Beautiful. I love the image painted in my mind.

i loved the tone you used and the rhyme. i want to write a poem exactly like this.

;_; truly deep and depressing....in a good way if there is such a thing i like how it rhyme it just made it flow better i think :)

wow so powerful

aw it was sad, but good.
so good its one
of my favorites that ive read.

Awe! That's sad, but it's true, sadly.