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  • Vampiric_Intent

    Vampiric_Intent (100)

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    Heh, my haiku's tend to be pretty obvious, just because I have trouble developing metaphors in three lines. I've been working on it though, just because I write so many.
    May 25th, 2010 at 10:07pm
  • Psycho.

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    [i]This is great >.<
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    May 25th, 2010 at 10:03pm
  • applesauce

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    Wow. I'm pretty stunned that anyone is actually capable of writing haiku, I mean, even the rhythms worked. It's a lovely poem, maybe a bit obvious, but really nice. Well done.
    May 25th, 2010 at 09:53pm
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