Blind Evil Snake - Comments

Qwertymann (100)

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Whoa. That's a really strong personification of manipulation. This is brilliant. I love how it's written and the deep meaning inside it.

And the end gave me chills. I like this. A lot.

June 7th, 2010 at 02:10pm

Borderline (100)

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Wow Jas that was AMAZING!!! You are such a fantastic poet. love youuuuu!!!

June 1st, 2010 at 09:33am

MiniMina (100)

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This i can relate to in a way.
Not completely but half way, I like that you made it rhyme.
This was written in a very poetic way dude i like it alot good job:)

May 30th, 2010 at 04:52am

maneater (100)

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Its not bad at all!! How did you learn to ryhme(excuse spelling) like that! Thats amazing. I like the imagery too! great poem.

May 26th, 2010 at 02:39am