The first two lines reminded me of some of the lyrics from "Kiss My Sass" by Cobra Starship: "You only see what I let you see/ Nothing less and nothing more" (Not saying that you copied it or anything, it just reminded me of them).
It's very easy for me to get annoyed with repetition in poetry, but I quite liked the way that you repeated the opening of the lines- "There's three times..." and "and three...".
The first two lines reminded me of some of the lyrics from "Kiss My Sass" by Cobra Starship: "You only see what I let you see/ Nothing less and nothing more" (Not saying that you copied it or anything, it just reminded me of them).
It's very easy for me to get annoyed with repetition in poetry, but I quite liked the way that you repeated the opening of the lines- "There's three times..." and "and three...".
Good job. :]