Shirley Temple Curls - Comments

This took an unexpected twist at the end. Hm. At first it had me thinking of my boyfriend ('cause he has adorable red curly hair, haha). But it got a lot darker in its imagery and I love that.

This is really different, really unique and just original! I love your description of hair in this and how you just make everything work.

Great job!

wow... agreed with the comment below. your poem sparks up my imagination. lovely! and the connection between tight curls and sakes is brilliant !

this is a really cool poem! Lots of hidden meanings, which is amazing. :)