I love the range of vocabulary that you've used throughout this poem, some of the descriptions that you've used have been really subtle and clever. I get a very clear picture in my head whilst reading through this and that clarity just speaks to how well you've written this.
I have read the same sort of vague plotline / idea that you convey in this, but they way that you've conveyed it is extremely original. I love the personification of the Dark and how it listens in at night. I find that a really interesting concept to think about.
All in all, pretty impressed. I'll be announcing the winners within the next week, so good luck!
I have read the same sort of vague plotline / idea that you convey in this, but they way that you've conveyed it is extremely original. I love the personification of the Dark and how it listens in at night. I find that a really interesting concept to think about.
All in all, pretty impressed. I'll be announcing the winners within the next week, so good luck!