The Straight Jacket - Comments

Perfect Imperfect (100)

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You would like my poem Taken.
Very detailed. takes to what the subject is feeling.

November 12th, 2010 at 04:59am

genocideforjenny (100)

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nice! psycologically thrilling!

November 1st, 2010 at 05:09am

TEZ. (100)

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it's amazing :) great work and nice use of imagination

June 10th, 2010 at 12:13am

FrozenFire (100)

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yeah you used great imagery like when you said "the shackles around my feet the metal make me cold" and i loved how the story goes, that they Are really crazy but they pretend not to be. the fifth stanza is my favorite.

June 2nd, 2010 at 11:47pm

Dots (100)

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Woah, this is by far one of my favourite poems I ever read here...
It had really good imagery you know. But it was really good:)

June 2nd, 2010 at 11:07pm