July 1st, 2010 at 10:52pm
Battleground - Comments
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amazing poem :D really wonderful job!June 21st, 2010 at 02:38am
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I realy like it. My second favorit by you. But I'm kinda scared to say what I think about it because there are a few differnt ways you could have ment it.
But I realy like the rhythmJune 8th, 2010 at 02:21am -
Wow, that's really good, and kinda relates to my life at the moment lol, so yeah, thats like an amazin poem :)June 3rd, 2010 at 11:55am
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It makes me want to sing out the words it ties together so well! Well done Enemy, lol.June 3rd, 2010 at 05:56am
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well done!!! you kept true to what you had to say and i believe this poem is very right by what you are protraying. nice job, i loved the ryhme!June 2nd, 2010 at 11:28pm
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Oh wow... I'm like wow'd by this. It was really really cool! And it had perfect flow and and wow :)June 2nd, 2010 at 11:04pm
Your poems have amazing rhythym and flow, and one thing I have to say is that I always find your subject matter quite relatable.
You write about life, pain, happiness, fear... basically, things that everyone call relate to. And you write exactly what you're feeling, which makes things even better!