Two Worlds - Comments

'Beauty is something/left undefined' is a brilliant statement, and something which is really true. I like a lot of the romantic imagery in the poem, it seems really sweet without being cliché, such as 'your world/is a children's story'. I particularly like that metaphor. I really liked this poem.

this is graceful, and beautiful
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You have a great talent

I really enjoyed this poem I like your combination of life contemplation mixed with a lost love. any poem that can make you tink is a great poem! thank you for that 4 out of 5 stars ( these)

That was an amazing poem with only 1 mistake (of present tense), entertaining and kinda funny too. ^_^

The ending was amazing but if that was modeled after me just know i would of been more cocky about the breakup in terms of pointing out that hoes flaws, GOOD JOB LOVE!

I never knew that angels could be poets as well, it makes me so happy knowing that I (and mike, and ppl, and annoying drug/sex parties) inspire you, or is that too much of an assumation, well, none the less, 5 stars love! 5/5 XD