-Judging for a contest-
Your poem was simple and to-the-point. It grabbed my attention from the start and the clever rhyme scheme and rhythm moved the poem along at a good pace. Very smart choice of words and everything glowed together nicely. The last lines [i]'If you thought high-school was hard, / you should try fame'[/i] were effective and got the message across to the reader extremely well. Thought-provoking lines to leave the reader with. Excellent work! :)
Your poem was simple and to-the-point. It grabbed my attention from the start and the clever rhyme scheme and rhythm moved the poem along at a good pace. Very smart choice of words and everything glowed together nicely. The last lines [i]'If you thought high-school was hard, / you should try fame'[/i] were effective and got the message across to the reader extremely well. Thought-provoking lines to leave the reader with. Excellent work! :)