Following the dream - Comments

I've read some of your other poems too, they're all so good! And nice as well, like a lot are about following your dreams (such as this one) and its really uplifting, kind of makes you want to get out there and do something :)

I think this would be much easier to read if it were spaced out. That way you don't have a jumble of words. The poem is very well written. It captures a sort of essence that some have trouble getting when writing these types of poems.

You kind of did stray from the point of the poem; I'm not sure if that was intentional or not, though. The message in the poem is great. It gives this sort of...push to o forth and follow your dream. All in all, it was pretty good.

kudos my friend, i'm gettin the same feeling these days. keep it up ^_^