:O I like it (its so deep) and the rhyming is perfect! :D
It is a little sad though...but you know that a poem is good when it impacts your audience (and it did) you go girl! :)
you made it flow very well and this was deep, but if your life is truly like this... your not the freakshow the people who laugh at you are. The ones that don't are mature and possibly want to know you better
It is a little sad though...but you know that a poem is good when it impacts your audience (and it did) you go girl! :)