Homepage › Poems › Bury Me › Comments

Bury Me - Comments

rkatz (100)

:

Member

Gender:

♀

Age:

41

Location:

United States

I love this.

Def something I can relate to.

July 10th, 2010 at 06:42am
xxMyDestinyxx (100)

:

Member

Gender:

♀

Age:

29

Location:

United States

I like this!

Great poem- extremely wellwritten

June 24th, 2010 at 12:39am
mike2640 (100)

:

Member

Gender:

♂

Age:

33

Location:

United States

I like it :). My main suggestion would be to watch your syllables; inconsistent syllables throw off the consistency developed by having a rhyme scheme. But it's a good idea, I like it!

June 15th, 2010 at 09:11pm

Homepage › Poems › Bury Me › Comments

© 2006-2024 Mibba.com