Sarahanne... Your writing is EXEMPLARY. Not to sound like a priss. But STILL. You're the best poet on the block. I wiiiiiiiiiiish I could create such FABULOUSNESS as youuuuu. AAAAUUURG! Jealous! Teehee. xD
This was actually really good. I was pleasantly surprised! :) I especially liked the lines "An intruder knocked at your door, Memory was her name." Intense.
(I saw you comment what I thought was a bit harshly on someone's poem so I came to see if you were any good. :P Happily, you are a fantastic poet. ^^ Yay!)