June 22nd, 2010 at 09:14am
I really like these kind of poems. It's not specific, but to me it seems like there's something wrong... It leaves lots of things open to interpretation, which means that a lot of people can relate. :)
Good job. :3
I love the descriptive imagery, it made him feel real and like I was actually there :)
Awesome poem, and especially at portraying what some actually go through :/