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  • Kestral101

    Kestral101 (100)

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    Thanks for the advice, i appreciate it.
    June 22nd, 2010 at 08:07pm
  • joyofthekill

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    I really like this, but i think that it lacks heart.
    It has all the good action and imagery, but you need what causes it
    June 22nd, 2010 at 07:58pm
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