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flamingpoo (100)

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Missing a quote on the third strophe and that last quote should go on the last line to give it some synergy and interesting layout.

January 15th, 2008 at 08:35pm
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That's amazing, is that part of your silent commitment?

January 3rd, 2008 at 04:41am

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