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  • flamingpoo

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    Missing a quote on the third strophe and that last quote should go on the last line to give it some synergy and interesting layout.
    January 15th, 2008 at 08:35pm
  • unknownauthor

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    That's amazing, is that part of your silent commitment?
    January 3rd, 2008 at 04:41am
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